Week 3.1 - 24/9/18 - INTERIM PRESENTATION

For our interim presentation, I put forwards a design that I was quite happy with, but the feedback I received made me realise there was perhaps to much of a focus on Marinui and made it appear as though it was being hosted by Marinui,  which I though was a fair enough comment to make, I'm going to look into how I could change this whilst still allowing the viewer to make the connection to Lyall Bay. Another thing to consider was colour as that is an integral part to the 50s style and at the moment, whilst the colours I've been using are eye catching they're not really fitting with our rhetorical device of pastiche.

This week I'm feeling a little bit like both myself and Maddie need to work a little harder to make sure our design appears collaborative as opposed to individual projects.

My Interim Poster